THE WOMAN IN THE PORTRAIT

Chapter 10

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The review had found repeated problems with quotations at the flagship branch and similar issues at two other sites. Optional products had been described as necessary. Charges included in advertised prices had appeared again under different names. Certain complaints had been marked resolved without evidence of any conversation with the customer.

Some transactions were correct. Some customers had understood exactly what they bought. The investigators made those distinctions clear. Eleanor respected them for it. The truth did not need exaggeration to be serious.

Graham had approved sales instructions inconsistent with company policy. He had also presented complaint figures to senior management without disclosing that branch staff were entering closures administratively. Whether every consequence had been intended would require further examination. The instructions themselves were in writing.

The board met that afternoon. Eleanor placed Andrew’s notebook beside her papers, then reconsidered and put it in her bag. His purchase mattered to the investigation. His handwriting did not need to become an argument nobody could comfortably challenge.

One director, Malcolm Price, opened with the cost of remediation.

“We need to understand the scale before making commitments.”

“Of course,” James said. “We also need to stop the practices immediately.”

“That is already happening. My concern is public communication.”

Eleanor looked at him. Malcolm had joined after investing in the group fifteen years earlier. He was not careless with people, but he had a habit of converting every problem into a sequence of risks and every risk into a number. It made him valuable in some rooms. In this one, she wanted him to look up from the page.

“What do you propose?” she asked.

“A measured statement once we have final conclusions. No unnecessary admissions.”

“Customers with unresolved complaints should not have to wait for a final report to learn where to contact us.”

“That can be handled individually.”

“Some of them have already been trying individually for months.”

Malcolm leaned back. “Nobody is suggesting we ignore them.”

“No. We have simply built several ways to delay listening.”

The room grew quiet. Ruth turned to the draft plan and described a dedicated review team, plain-language notices, an independent contact route, and scheduled updates. Customers would receive individual explanations and appropriate corrections. Staff would receive written protection against retaliation for participating.

The proposal cost money. It also required time from employees whose performance targets were already full. James recommended reducing those targets during the work rather than quietly expecting staff to handle both.

Malcolm frowned. “That will affect the quarter.”

“Yes,” James said.

Eleanor watched him. The word was small. It was also the first useful thing anyone had said about the figures all afternoon.

“The quarter has already been affected,” James continued. “We are deciding whether the accounts reflect that honestly.”

By the end of the meeting, the board approved the plan. It also commissioned a review of its own oversight and paused the regional sale discussions until the information could be verified. Graham remained suspended while the disciplinary process continued. The company would cooperate with any external inquiries and preserve all relevant records.

Eleanor left exhausted. She had wanted accountability, not the revival of every exhausting part of building a business. Her knee ached. The corridor seemed longer than it had that morning.

James caught up with her beside the lift.

“You could have said more.”

“About what?”

“Andrew.”

She looked at him. “Would it have made the plan more correct?”

“No.”

“Then it was not necessary.”

He nodded. For once, she thought he had understood without needing the thought translated into a target.

Daniel was waiting outside. He had taken the afternoon off after she admitted that she was tired. She objected on principle, then accepted on the condition that he stop treating her like a piece of fragile glass.

“Fragile glass rarely argues this much,” he said.

“Good. Then you have evidence.”

They drove to a small restaurant near the station. It had paper menus, uneven tables, and a waiter who called everybody darling without making it sound like an assessment. Eleanor ordered soup. Daniel gave her a look.

“I like soup,” she said.

“You can order anything.”

“I have. Soup.”

He smiled and closed his menu.

While they waited, he told her that his firm had received approval for a community footbridge project. It connected an estate on the far side of the railway to a school and medical center. He had worked on the design for almost two years.

“That is wonderful,” she said. “Why didn’t you tell me first?”

“You’ve had other things.”

She set down her water. “Do not do that.”

“What?”

“Make your life smaller because mine has become noisy.”

He looked at her, caught between affection and irritation. “You did it when Dad was sick.”

“Yes. You can learn from mistakes without repeating them.”

The waiter brought bread. Daniel tore a piece and thought about the old habit they shared: protecting each other by withholding the parts of life that might demand attention. It had once looked like kindness. Lately he had begun seeing how easily kindness could become distance when nobody admitted what they needed.

“I wanted you at the opening,” he said. “If it happens in the spring.”

“I intend to be there.”

“Even if the company is still in a mess?”

“Especially then. I may need reminding what honest construction looks like.”

He laughed. “You know the bridge has a budget problem.”

“All honest construction has a budget problem.”

At home, Eleanor found an envelope pushed through the door. It was not from the company. Arthur Bell had written on plain stationery, enclosing a photograph of June beside the car they bought.

She was smiling in the picture, one hand resting on the roof. Whatever had happened afterward, the moment itself had been happy. Eleanor was grateful Arthur had shared that instead of allowing the purchase to become only an injury.

His note said the review team had called at the time they promised. A woman named Nadia had explained the process twice because he wanted to write it down. She had not sounded impatient. He had not yet received an answer about the final amount, but for the first time he believed someone was actually examining it.

At the bottom, he wrote: June would have liked your son. He listens without finishing the sentence for you.

Eleanor called Daniel and read him that part.

He went quiet.

“Are you there?” she asked.

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